Name Changes

ok. first of all, i decided to tweak a few things in my CSI:NY stories.

the characters that i created, their names for one.

*i changed Abby's name from ABBY DONOVAN to ABBY WALKER, i just like the last name WALKER better is all. plus, Detective Walker flows better, i think.
*i changed Cadence's name from CADENCE HOOPER to BRADY HOOPER. idk, i just liked Brady better than Cadence. to me, Cadence started to sound like a girl's name.

in the first story, it was all about the case, no? (i tried) i did have a few holes, i noticed as i read over the final copy, but i don't have any kinda program to edit my stories on, so yeah...

well, in later stories, especially the one that i plan to do a la "Trapped" style when Abby & Danny probe a shooting at Antanella's Deli, they get trapped in (yes, Danny, another panic room, damn!) with a lil girl cos she is scared & decides to push the "panic button" like she's always been told to do if anything should ever happen...

there will be more one-on-one action b/t the characters, since Abby's arrival, cos i wanna do character stuff more than the cases. not to say that the cases won't play a major role in the stories, cos it is CSI:NY, after all, but i wanna get to the heart of the story-line b/t Abby/Danny/Lindsay/Flack, ya know.

i know some of ya'll are wishin' for the smuttiness that i have not gotten to yet, but the smut will be in the later ones, promise! :) i just wanna make ya'll wait for it, cos i'm mean like that. no, i just wanna play up the dynamic b/t Danny & Abby first. i wanna show ya'll that there's more to their relationship than just sex!!!

i will be posting my 2nd story soon. :) i will try not to be so slow about posting "I CAN'T DECIDE" like i was with "BOULEVARD OF BROKEN DREAMS" k?

--Mandy--